To my what more I like it of the winter it is that there isn't school and we enjoy the holidays with friends and with family and I like to go to the snow also because in vinaros does not snow and we go to villages of mountain as Morella.
miércoles, 7 de noviembre de 2012
ALREADY THIS HER THE WINTER
The summer already it stays behind and these so perfect moments also and now it touches a time of winter, cold, snow, rain...and the people put ill,but in winter are more parties in Vinaròs.The most important is Cristhmas and the funniest party is Carnival but does very much coldly in the night because it is in February.
To my what more I like it of the winter it is that there isn't school and we enjoy the holidays with friends and with family and I like to go to the snow also because in vinaros does not snow and we go to villages of mountain as Morella.
To my what more I like it of the winter it is that there isn't school and we enjoy the holidays with friends and with family and I like to go to the snow also because in vinaros does not snow and we go to villages of mountain as Morella.
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I don´t like winter, because it's very cold
ResponderEliminarAnd very long...
ResponderEliminarHi Ana!
ResponderEliminarWe aren't in winter yet! Winter starts on 21st December... so we are still in autumn... Despite this, you are right... cold weather has arrived!
by the way, could you correct the title of the post? It is not correct, as you wanted to say that "winter is already here" (even it is not true)
;)
Besides, inside the post, there are some mistakes you have to correct. For example,
ResponderEliminar* The summer already it stays behind and these so perfect moments also and now it touches a time of winter, cold, snow, rain...and the people put ill,but in winter are more parties in Vinaròs -> Summer is already over (or finished) and so those perfect moments, too. Now we have got winter weather: cold, snof, rain... and people get sick. However, there are more parties in Vinaròs during winter.
Do you see it, Ana? We don't say "it touches a time of winter" but "the weather is..." or "it is..." so, I have written your paragraph, and you will correct the rest of your text, ok?
;)
Ana, why haven't you corrected this post yet? It's been more than a month since I told you!!!
EliminarRemember you must write comments on your classmates' blogs, and also on mine!!